I used the feedback from my last idea to construct a second contents page. I have added headings to break my contents page down and allow the reader to navigate around my magazine easier. I have placed bigger, bolder images with page number to allow an insight into the article. I have changed the layout of the magazine so that the articles are more readable and hopefully my contents page looks more professional. During making necessary changes, I decided to experiment with different images to see whether they were more appealing to my target audience.
Feedback-
Rachel- I like the photos especially and i really like the colours as I believe that they are fresh and young and vibrant. My only criticism would be that I find the font a little small.
Alex- The photos are really befitting to the theme of the magazine and the colours are really vibrant and work really well. One criticism would be the font size.
Amy- i really like the colours used on the contents page as its bright and bold which links great with your chosen music genre if you were to change anything or improve would be to maybe change the font used on the contents page as its small and maybe use a different colour . Overall its really great.
Kate- I love the colours and layout of the contents page, as a whole it looks aesthetically pleasing and will draw the eye of the reader instantly. The variation of the photos is really good, and shows a variation within the magazine. The only improvement I can see is maybe try and include an advert such as a competition or subscription advert. Other than that I love it.
Sarah- I love your contents! The colours are great and eye catching and I like how you have used headings to separate all of your articles. I like how you have put the page numbers by the images and how you have followed the font you have used on the front cover, I think that the font is clear, I would however make it larger so that it is easier to read. :) Love it !
I will take into account the feedback and produce a contents page which, hopefully, fulfills what my target audiences wishes to see.
Feedback-
Rachel- I like the photos especially and i really like the colours as I believe that they are fresh and young and vibrant. My only criticism would be that I find the font a little small.
Alex- The photos are really befitting to the theme of the magazine and the colours are really vibrant and work really well. One criticism would be the font size.
Amy- i really like the colours used on the contents page as its bright and bold which links great with your chosen music genre if you were to change anything or improve would be to maybe change the font used on the contents page as its small and maybe use a different colour . Overall its really great.
Kate- I love the colours and layout of the contents page, as a whole it looks aesthetically pleasing and will draw the eye of the reader instantly. The variation of the photos is really good, and shows a variation within the magazine. The only improvement I can see is maybe try and include an advert such as a competition or subscription advert. Other than that I love it.
Sarah- I love your contents! The colours are great and eye catching and I like how you have used headings to separate all of your articles. I like how you have put the page numbers by the images and how you have followed the font you have used on the front cover, I think that the font is clear, I would however make it larger so that it is easier to read. :) Love it !
I will take into account the feedback and produce a contents page which, hopefully, fulfills what my target audiences wishes to see.
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