Double Page Number Two.

After my first double page spread received such negative feedback, I decided to rethink my whole double page spread idea, and I decided to go for a bigger, bolder picture as this is what my readers wanted to see, I also, after changing my image on the cover, took some more pictures as my previous pictures seemed a little pixelated.

Feedback-

Rachel- I like how the text is written on the blue and also how the main focus of the page is the photo. I like the top left hand corner of how the neon colours tie in with the outfits of the people in the image. I love it.

Alex- I love how it is mainly an image for your front cover, and how it gives the magazine a 'summer' feel, this is also reflected in your colour scheme. I like how you have incorporated the colour scheme of the rest of the magazine in just the left hand corner, it acts like a subtle trademark. I think its really clever.

Amy- I love the image used, it reminds me of holidays and summer! It looks very professional and is of high quality, it doesn't seem to have pixelated. I like the amount of text used too, there doesn't seem to be too much or too little and I love how it is part of the picture but doesn't distract away from the image. However, it could do with page numbers so that it links to the contents page, but that's all.

Kate- It looks very well thought out, the colours of the image seem to reflect them used in your magazine, yet not so much that it is overwhelming. The image is bright and fun and looks like a photo shoot, which is a good thing! The image isn't pixelated and the text colour and font really match the feel of the magazine and image, it could however, have page numbers to make it look a little more professional.

Sarah- I love how the image and the genre of your magazine seem to match, I love the colour scheme and the font. Also, I love how it looks like a poster and yet it is a double page spread. I like the simplicity of it yet, how effective it is. I love how the band name is the same of that on the front cover, to show uniformity throughout your magazine.

Me- I feel that this double page spread is a vast improvement than my intial double page spread and I will add page numbers as that is a critisism that my target readers seem to pick up on.

Front Cover Number Three

After altering my colour scheme on my contents page, I needed to incorporate it into my front cover, and therefore I decided that I needed to make a few changes in order for it to look more professional. I used the feedback from my last front cover, and added or removed certain aspects of my front cover, I have also decided to change the image on the front cover as I feel that the image was a little pixelated.


Feedback-

Rachel- I really like the new front cover, I think that it represents your magazine better than your other front covers. I also love the orange on the cover and it makes the magazine look like a summer edition- which is great!

Alex- A really well constructed and pretty piece of work! I like the detail and the colour scheme quite a lot. The font goes well with the theme as does the squiggly pattern in the corner - really well done!

Kate- I really like the front cover that you have produced. The new picture works really effectively and draws the readers eye to the cover instantly. The fonts and effects work really well to attract the specific genre and your target reader. The only thing I think of to improve is to add a price and issue number to the front cover to allow it to look more professional. Other than that I love it.

Amy- I think that it has very much improved, really good. I like the colour scheme and it stands out to the reader, to improve, just add the price.

Sarah- I love the image used, the magazine looks fresh and summery and i thin that will have a positive effect on the reader, this is also supported by the colour scheme. Your images, font, music genre and colour scheme all work together nicely for a very good result! I love it!

Me- This is my favourite front cover so far, it looks much more full and vibrant compared to the others. I think incorporating the orange was a good idea and the new image looks much more fun and lively. If I feel that I can improve my front cover further, I will make changes as I continue further work on my products.

Double Page Spread Number One

From my research, I have constructed a double page spread which hopefully get my target audiences approval. I have incorporated the colour scheme from the front cover and contents page to allow my products to appear linked. I have used an image of the band that links to the front cover and hopefully it looks interesting and young.

Feedback-

Rachel- I like the colour scheme and the font, however I feel that it is very plain and could do with a bigger main feature picture, also, the image looks a little plain. There is too many white spaces for my liking.

Alex- I like how the contents, front page and double page spread all reflect each other, however, I feel that this looks really cheap and unprofessional and definately needs either, more text, a bigger picture, or more pictures to hide those white spaces!

Amy- I like how the image on the front cover and double page spread are linked, I like how you have kept the same style and colour throughout, however, I feel that this magazine double page spread looks very cheap, plain and unprofessional, I think with further development though, it could look really good, your idea just needs to be reconsidered.

Kate- I like the way that the image used on your front cover and the image on your double page spread look similar but different, it shows that the magazine is uniform, however I dont like the double page spread in general. It looks very empty and plain. Use bigger images and think more carefully about the layout!

Sarah- I like the squiggly patterns in the corner, they look like those used on previous products, however, it seems that the image used is pixelated and too small, also the layout doesnt seem to flatter the amount of text to image ratio- it looks very amateur!

Me- I completely agree with the feedback I have recieved, I dont personally like my douible page spread, and if I brought a magazine which contained this double page spread, I would be very dissappointed as it looks unprofessional and boring.

I will make another double page spread, which will hopefully satisfy my target audience much more than this one, I will take into consideration the layout, images, colour scheme and font.

Contents Page Number Two

I used the feedback from my last idea to construct a second contents page. I have added headings to break my contents page down and allow the reader to navigate around my magazine easier. I have placed bigger, bolder images with page number to allow an insight into the article. I have changed the layout of the magazine so that the articles are more readable and hopefully my contents page looks more professional. During making necessary changes, I decided to experiment with different images to see whether they were more appealing to my target audience.



Feedback-


Rachel- I like the photos especially and i really like the colours as I believe that they are fresh and young and vibrant. My only criticism would be that I find the font a little small.



Alex- The photos are really befitting to the theme of the magazine and the colours are really vibrant and work really well. One criticism would be the font size.



Amy- i really like the colours used on the contents page as its bright and bold which links great with your chosen music genre if you were to change anything or improve would be to maybe change the font used on the contents page as its small and maybe use a different colour . Overall its really great.



Kate- I love the colours and layout of the contents page, as a whole it looks aesthetically pleasing and will draw the eye of the reader instantly. The variation of the photos is really good, and shows a variation within the magazine. The only improvement I can see is maybe try and include an advert such as a competition or subscription advert. Other than that I love it.



Sarah- I love your contents! The colours are great and eye catching and I like how you have used headings to separate all of your articles. I like how you have put the page numbers by the images and how you have followed the font you have used on the front cover, I think that the font is clear, I would however make it larger so that it is easier to read. :) Love it !



I will take into account the feedback and produce a contents page which, hopefully, fulfills what my target audiences wishes to see.