Feedback:Rachel- I like the idea of this magazine. It looks fun and energetic and not too busy. However, the use of the second image is confusing and personally, I think it would look better without it. Also, the background still looks a little plain.
Alex- I really like the images used, the colour scheme and the splatters on the page, it makes the magazine look cool and interesting. However, I think the layout could be better.
Amy- This magazine is bright and youthful, which will attract a wde audience, however, the second image draws the attraction away from the main article and so could maybe be removed.
Kate- This magazine still looks a little empty for my liking, however I love how vibrant it looks. Its definately eye-catching!
Sarah- I like the splatters on the page, it looks proffesional and interesting. I dont see the relevance of the second, smaller picture and just think its distracting. The headings, fonts and colours look good though.
From my feedback, I will produce a second front cover and make any neccessary changes.

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